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Come a festival, we splurge
Exuberance in everything we indulge
Love, laughter and loads of sweets
Every person merrily greets
But perhaps we must change
Ready to share with the ones denied
A little love if we spared
Then shall He be real pleased
In other's joy, if we beamed.
Of all the things He created, remember
None is less precious, My dear!
So lets give and show Him we dare to care
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Beautiful! The thought of sharing your happiness with the less privileged ones is appealing.It's gud to see how a strong message has been conveyed in the form of a pleasing acrostic. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteAll the best! :)
HE will surely be pleased when we do the work that he is expected to do, and become him through these acts of kindness. short and sweet, good luck with batom!
ReplyDeleteThat's cool.
ReplyDeleteI loved it.
Congos.
It is very very good.
At last u made an acrostic and a poem, awesome
Cool!! That was pretty nice. I expected whethr someone could do that and u did that shruthi.
ReplyDeleteWishes to Shruthi from Shruti :) (Sounds nice na?! ;) )
ATB :)
Well said Shruti, a very beautifully written acrostic, almost complete in itself, short but sweet and a very good message came with it, yes, we must share to the less fortunate, that is the real essence of a happy celebration!
ReplyDeleteGood luck dear! :-)
Nice acro...First of ts kind in this BAT.
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Jaspreet, Saro, Mudd, Shruti, Amity and Lost in thoughts thank you all so much for your kind words...trully encouraging:) Good Luck to you all for bat
ReplyDeletewow an acrostic...my favorite form of poetry :)
ReplyDeletebeautifully written :)
All the best :)
Here is my celebration:
Ms. Meduri- Celebrations
Beautiful interpretation of the post. Loved the poem. All the best.
ReplyDeletevery creative expression of celebration.all the best for BAT
ReplyDeleteThat's a nice way to do it Shruthi. Innovative, I say.
ReplyDeleteThe message is also clear. A lot of us have touched on this in this round. Great!
All things bright and beautiful.....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful message you have conveyed and in an even more captivating manner-fresh and innocent.
ATB for BATOM !
Nice... just stumbled upon this piece somehow while surfing and I'm glad I did. Nice literary streak there...
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